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    dots Submission Name: stupid questionsdots
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    Author: namesdontmatter
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/89/29
    Words: 198
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       yet another plaque for lameness goes to me yaya yaya yaya im so glad the guy i like doesnt get on this site


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    dotsstupid questionsdots
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    rain drips slowly but not silently
    it gives me something to concentrate on
    besides you not calling
    and me sitting here writing this pathetic song
    just another tribute to you
    sometimes i hate myself

    pippity pop pippity pop
    whoever has seen that cartoon will know what that means
    in case youre wondering
    i take them with coffee
    not anything that could really kill me
    dont worry im not that far gone

    the keyboard is too loud
    so is the phone
    making it even more obvious that i cant sleep
    soon i wont be the only one worrying
    but all the stress in the world wont make you love me

    why do i need you to love me anyway
    ive never thought i was insecure
    ive never needed someone before
    and why dont you while im asking questions
    is it the sugar or the pez
    because i dont think thats weird

    i guess those are what you call stupid questions
    not stupid easy but stupid to ask
    like youre going to answer me
    but if i had a birthday cake
    that is what id wish
    because all i want is for you to be honest




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