Tragic Saturday Pt 2
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yea i know it's been a while since anyone has read that poem. If you haven't read Tragic Saturday pt 1. Read that first then read this. Just so you'll get it. I don't think this one was as great as the first but hey it's hard to top the first poem. Anyways tell me your thoughts.
Tragic Saturday Pt 2
I wonder what would've happened had i not shot myself probally would've went and shot somebody else maybe my bastard father who would rape me in my sleep maybe even my mother who turned the other cheek was away his scent every single night nightmares haunted my dreams of when i tried to fight one day it got too hard so when they went away i made a real bad choice i'm regretting to this day i hated to make my friend watch as i put the gun to my head how the tears stain my face but you guys know since i'm dead. |
Submitted on 2005-11-27 12:45:18 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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suicide's lame but i still thought this one was pretty cool. life sux for this girl and i can see why she would do what she did. it's just hard to cope sometimes| | Posted on 2005-11-30 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ] | *claps* I'm adding this sequel to my fav's. In my opinion I thought it was better than the first, lol. This was so powerful and filled with so much emotion it was almost unbearable! Great job! | | Posted on 2005-11-27 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ] | |
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