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    dots Submission Name: Whispers in the nightdots
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    Author: hotrodruss
    Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 396/342/116
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
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    Whispers in the night

    Remember how it used to be
    Back when we were young lovers
    How you used to comfort me
    With your whispers in the night

    Whispers in the night, whispers in the night
    Telling me that itís alright
    Iím right here by your side
    Donít you be afraid

    Well now years later in time
    As I lay alone in the dark
    I still hear your whispers
    Even though youíre no longer there

    Whispers in the night, whispers in the night
    Telling me that itís alright
    Iím right here by your side
    Donít you be afraid

    Whispers in the night,
    Oh yeah whispers the night
    yeah whispers in the night
    Donít be afraid
    Iím right here by side
    Whispers in the night

    Whispers in the night

    © 2005 HotRodRuss




    Submitted on 2005-11-27 14:08:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sweet and tender. Definately full of passion. Every line of every word I read it slow and observed the feeling inside. Very much indeed, I could hear the voice of love echoes through the writes.
    | Posted on 2005-12-02 00:00:00 | by the_Observer | [ Reply to This ]
      i agree, its realli sweet and sad and I love it. make sure you keep writing, you'll go realli far, I would even bui a book of poems if you collect and composite them all into one.
    | Posted on 2005-11-27 00:00:00 | by AngryAtTheWorld | [ Reply to This ]
      this was really beautiful. so sweet yet so sad. i really really really liked it. you did good sir and ihope that your pen continues to flow across the paper. thank you

    xoxo
    that girl
    | Posted on 2005-11-27 00:00:00 | by sweet sorenity | [ Reply to This ]


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