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addiction to mind-set

Author: bloodied_angel
ASL Info:    15/Female/Oklahoma
Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 79 /119 /44
Words: 80
Class/Type: Rant /Passion
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i dont know

addiction to mind-set

passion be as passion is
passionat feeling of the quietly abused
passionat writeing of the slightly mad
passionat madness is slightly sad

obsession on what it means to me obsessed
obsessive outlook on a man made life
obsessed engravment on minds of the fools
obsessed psychosis is vaguely poignant

fixation on what is fixated upon
fixated eyes on whats been done wrong
fixated markings in nerodic souls
fixated craze is a little depressiong

Submitted on 2005-11-27 15:52:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  its verry original, and beining a recoverd person from an adiction i could really see where you where comming from,
mabe have it more flowing next time,
| Posted on 2005-11-27 00:00:00 | by morriscool4 | [ Reply to This ]
  i added it to mi favorites. I like it. but the spelling is slightli off. You might want to edit it and use correct grammar. But that's just mi opinion
| Posted on 2005-11-27 00:00:00 | by AngryAtTheWorld | [ Reply to This ]
  This was an interesting write and I enjoyed reading it. This poem made a lot of sense to me; it conveyed a lot of truth in it. I'm glad that you shared this very original piece with us, keep it up!
| Posted on 2005-11-27 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]

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