addiction to mind-set

Author: bloodied_angel ASL Info:    15/Female/Oklahoma Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 79 /119 /44 Words: 80

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addiction to mind-set

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passion be as passion is passionat feeling of the quietly abused passionat writeing of the slightly mad passionat madness is slightly sad obsession on what it means to me obsessed obsessive outlook on a man made life obsessed engravment on minds of the fools obsessed psychosis is vaguely poignant fixation on what is fixated upon fixated eyes on whats been done wrong fixated markings in nerodic souls fixated craze is a little depressiong

Submitted on 2005-11-27 15:52:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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its verry original, and beining a recoverd person from an adiction i could really see where you where comming from, mabe have it more flowing next time,

| Posted on 2005-11-27 00:00:00 | by morriscool4 | [ Reply to This ]

i added it to mi favorites. I like it. but the spelling is slightli off. You might want to edit it and use correct grammar. But that's just mi opinion

| Posted on 2005-11-27 00:00:00 | by AngryAtTheWorld | [ Reply to This ]

This was an interesting write and I enjoyed reading it. This poem made a lot of sense to me; it conveyed a lot of truth in it. I'm glad that you shared this very original piece with us, keep it up!

| Posted on 2005-11-27 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]

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