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    dots Submission Name: addiction to mind-setdots
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    Author: bloodied_angel
    ASL Info:    15/Female/Oklahoma
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 79/119/44
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Rant/Passion
    Total Views: 855
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 545



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    dotsaddiction to mind-setdots
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    passion be as passion is
    passionat feeling of the quietly abused
    passionat writeing of the slightly mad
    passionat madness is slightly sad

    obsession on what it means to me obsessed
    obsessive outlook on a man made life
    obsessed engravment on minds of the fools
    obsessed psychosis is vaguely poignant


    fixation on what is fixated upon
    fixated eyes on whats been done wrong
    fixated markings in nerodic souls
    fixated craze is a little depressiong




    Submitted on 2005-11-27 15:52:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      its verry original, and beining a recoverd person from an adiction i could really see where you where comming from,
    mabe have it more flowing next time,
    | Posted on 2005-11-27 00:00:00 | by morriscool4 | [ Reply to This ]
      i added it to mi favorites. I like it. but the spelling is slightli off. You might want to edit it and use correct grammar. But that's just mi opinion
    | Posted on 2005-11-27 00:00:00 | by AngryAtTheWorld | [ Reply to This ]
      This was an interesting write and I enjoyed reading it. This poem made a lot of sense to me; it conveyed a lot of truth in it. I'm glad that you shared this very original piece with us, keep it up!
    | Posted on 2005-11-27 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]


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