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    dots Submission Name: the shrouddots
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    Author: auntwheezie
    ASL Info:    45/Female/Dartmouth NS
    Elite Ratio:    4.37 - 75/57/18
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 159
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    Bytes: 760



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    dotsthe shrouddots
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    enshrouded in a veil of mystery
    closed off from what is around you
    yet,it is awash with the sounds of life
    cars crawling by appearing out of the
    swirling grey shadows
    the noise from the engine strangely muted
    red tail lights flicker one last time
    before vanishing in the mist
    a ghostly image appears before being
    swallowed whole once more
    the faint echo of high heels
    clicking on the pavement
    the sea leaves a strong scent
    in the shrouded cloak
    that visits this harbor town
    heated concrete and city smells
    are crushed under its weight for a time
    before escaping to enshroud us in
    its own cloak when the fog
    returns to the sea.




    Submitted on 2005-11-28 09:04:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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