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Contemplating My Confession...


Author: Flamequill
ASL Info:    17/Male/Sparta Michigan
Elite Ratio:    3.42 - 77 /97 /35
Words: 71
Class/Type: Poetry /Lostfriend
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I wrote this early on during my needing a big brother phase. I still need him, it's just not as strong as it was. Randy is just the result, the outcome, the brother of what I am. I want to be him, but I want to be me as well. Yeah I know this poem sounds really longing but hey I'm complex.

Anything would be nice for comments


Contemplating My Confession...



to A Future Confidant (stupid title box)

I can't keep
doing this
I think I'mg
going to explode

If I don't
say....
anything to him

Why does this
always happen
to me

I can't help it though
I can't stop thinking
about what
he thinks of me

I wish I could tell him
without being
shunned or misunderstood

Why couldn't
he be
my brother?




Submitted on 2005-11-28 10:52:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Its pretty choppy but I think thats what I like about it. Cool style.. could be elaborated but its good. Im so happy you are into poetry now.

Amber
| Posted on 2005-12-05 00:00:00 | by PoeticSoul666 | [ Reply to This ]


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