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Losing


Author: Flamequill
ASL Info:    17/Male/Sparta Michigan
Elite Ratio:    3.42 - 77 /97 /35
Words: 69
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Bad I know.....oh well tell me what you think

Zoom zoom zoom (thinking about mazda sry)

yeah well enjoy


Losing



He's losing himself
I see it
I know it
He knows I know

He'sw losing himself
to smoke
to pain
to family
and not friends

I see his eyes
I see the madness
losing him
I know I am

Get away from here
run, leave, flee
end the madness
finish your pain

Please good friend
just go away
flee this life
and I'll soon follow




Submitted on 2005-11-28 10:59:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  You write as depressing as I do. LOL He'sw is a slip but its an interesting way of writing. It sounds almost as though he has given up, just stopped fighting. Interesting. Keep it up Paco.
| Posted on 2005-11-28 00:00:00 | by Kalis | [ Reply to This ]
  I really liked this, I thought it was quite strange and very true to life. Perhaps it could flow a little more? I dunno, I thought it was really good any way!
| Posted on 2005-11-28 00:00:00 | by nuttyginna | [ Reply to This ]


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