even saints are sinners
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even saints are sinners
dark angels hovering my head as my demons try to set me free such a lovely day sky's raining blood so refreshing just can't enough fore i am guilty and i admit it isn' that more, than i can say for you? tired of dying! tired of trying! leaving me in my failures again! when you suceed at failing precicly what happens in the end? dead bodies lying everywhere blood is falling from heaven above from the angels of no mercy for the poor depraved and wicked soul! hate lust agony mistrust everything that makes the world go 'round but we're drowning in the blood of the guilty from the angels above there's no hope now blood on heavens gate the angels take my hand my demons release me as i'm welcomed through the ninth gate fore the last time |
Submitted on 2005-11-28 13:13:48 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| i like it i hate society thats why i spend most my time on the computer i like your poem lots pease read some of my stuff | Posted on 2005-12-06 00:00:00 | by bloodied_angel | [ Reply to This ] | I think this was ok...the repitition of 'raining blood' got old real fast, so you might want to mix it up abit on that, but other than that i liked the concept. | ~Kane~ | Posted on 2005-12-01 00:00:00 | by Kane Martyr | [ Reply to This ] | I like and hate it at the same time so I'll have to think more about that but it is very interesting but there is great sorrow and alot of blood so I don't know | | Posted on 2005-11-29 00:00:00 | by Animus Custodis | [ Reply to This ] | this was sweet...well as in cool. i really liked it and it was smooth and deep. this would make a really cool song and i just like the way its spoken. you should keep writing like this. i really like this and i should come back and see some stuff you put up. | -BleedingTears | Posted on 2005-11-28 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ] | |
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