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    dots Submission Name: Love.......dots
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    Author: Lady Almira
    ASL Info:    16 Female Redding Ca
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 26/37/17
    Words: 736
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsLove.......dots
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    Whisper sweet seduction in my ear
    Words like heated fingers play on my skin
    Calling my heart out to the surface
    Finding all the hidden emotions within
    Even thought I tried to hide, hide away
    You blew away all the lies, leaving fate
    You place your arms around me
    Holding me tight back to you
    I'm losing my mind as I'm learning your secrets
    Sounds on my skin, caressing like heated fingertips
    Searching out secret places
    Strong than soft then stronger than before
    Being in love with a star in the heavens
    Feeling your breath on my skin
    Almost tasting your fingerprints
    When your voice says my name
    I don't own myself anymore
    I don't understand whats happening to me
    The wetness of your breath
    I part my lips and welcome you into my mouth
    To the place deep inside me
    Did you try to find my face in a sea of ten thousand
    Were you frightend when I wasn't there
    Were you longing? Thinking of me?
    Thats all I need to know
    You play your piano and its as if your seducing your instrument
    Tickling the keys making it sing for me
    For this, for us, I would sacrafice anything
    Your playing me like an instrument
    Tickling the keys coaxing your music from me
    Translating my moans and shudders into melody
    You understand me better than I understand myself now
    I don't belong to me anymore, but to you
    I want you so badly it hurts inside
    Everytime I think I understand you
    You show me another hidden side
    I now know what it feels like to fall
    Fall in love with a fantasy, a star so high up
    I could be cruel if I thought it would make you love me
    The honey color of our skin, warm breath, skilled hands
    Everything about you makes me tremble and sweat
    I drink in your sweet whispers
    I've survied on your lies
    Your more than just a man in my eyes
    The first time you saw me you knew
    You looked and you laughed
    I cried out to live, to take my revengeon pain and past
    You smiled eyes dancing with mirth
    Causing my heart to race within
    Like you were whispering in my ear
    All the loving words I so long to hear
    Just listen for it, just listen for it you said
    I did not I understand, I heard what you meant
    The first I heard was for you, from you
    I knew it the first time I saw you as well
    Do you believe in destiny
    I don't think our meeting was an accident
    It feels bigger than that, destined to be
    Bestine to be, just you and me
    Thats how this feels
    I like the way we play when its just the two of us
    Me and you, just together like this
    Its easy to imagine that our kiss was more
    More than just an act of pity, or a tease
    Easy to pretend for once that you love me
    When you held me close in your arms
    When you said it was destiny to, fate and our kiss
    Was any of it real? Was any of it true?
    Do you love me as you seem and I dream you do
    Or were you just playing, playing with my tainted heart
    Please don't do this, this pain sided leaving me torn
    Its killing me slowly, my sould skrinking to die
    I don't want you to pity me
    I want you to love me
    I don't care about anything else
    I need this, I need yyou, I can't bear the pain anymore
    Forget, forget everything you've heard about me
    And I'll do the same
    Lets just fly away together
    Winging toward forever
    Its all white in my head
    I can't think, can't find my feet beneath me
    It feels like falling, falling
    And I know................
    I love you




    Submitted on 2005-11-28 15:41:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow a nice poem you have, overall is great, especially the ending, i can feel the same like you since i had been in that kind of situation once. I like the way you use paradox like
    I don't want you to pity me
    I want you to love me
    I don't care about anything else
    I need this, I need yyou, I can't bear the pain anymore

    "I need this, I need yyou, I can't bear the pain anymore" - mean you want to leave him but he always appear in front of you.

    Btw keep it up, its so sweet and touching me

    -garnet4david-
    | Posted on 2005-11-30 00:00:00 | by garnet4david | [ Reply to This ]



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