The Need For Him Is Leaving
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yeah I know this is mezzo blah, but okay. Tell me what you think......
Oh I figured out I write like a woman, please prove or disprove
otherwise enjoy
Oh I figured out I write like a woman, please prove or disprove
otherwise enjoy
The Need For Him Is Leaving
The need for him is leaving no longer an obsession I yearn for the same feeling I had before of him The brotherly compassion no longer in my heart still I want that fashion the love I once had I'm turning into him no longer my old self but still it too his whim his strenght and all his soul To open upt to me to save me from myself But still the feeling leaves me to yonder person seeking help The truth is I don't know him to love, respect, or admire The truth is I can't know him but that is easy to to restore My brother will not leave me nor will I leave him too much has happened inside me to abandon one like that Stay strong, wise, and loving for him and for all 'cuz everyone needs the feeling of love, riends, and love |
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| when i first read the title i thought it was about some guy who is leaving some girl... well that just goes to show that looks can be decieving. its good, very good. but you should probably look over your words because you have extra letters in some places and missing letters in other places. the spelling might need some work but the content of this work is great. it is about growing out of the need for someone. right? i really like this work... thank you for writing it. | Posted on 2005-11-29 00:00:00 | by kiet aiden | [ Reply to This ] | |
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