When I read this I inidetly thought of one of my best friends she likes butterflys and I think that the theam of this piece(?) is a friend thinking about what the other friends did to them and then stabbed them in the back . any way just my opinion and the word choise is amazing! wish it was a little longer
For a piece without any preplanned thought it is beautifully done, you get the feeling that the person has no control over what is going on around them...but that they see it, it is diffidently a piece that has more deepth than just a first glance...it was a pleasure to read
I got the impression of one being caught up and lost in the scheme of things - it all being too much. Anyway, whatever the meaning, it was a very good write and the description used was very very good.
The best poems tend to just come to you. I liked this one a lot. The imagery is excellent, especially in the last stanza. I like the mood as well, it's sort of distant and calm but also sad. However, it's kind of vague, and I'm not really sure what it's about. Maybe I'm missing something, but it just seemed to me like a bunch of images loosely strung together that don't really connect or have any meaning. I mean, they don't have to mean something if that wasn't your intent, it just feels like there's a little something missing...
Submission Name: Fragility
