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    dots Submission Name: Love(-2-)dots
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    Author: Wolfeye_666
    ASL Info:    14/M/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    6.53 - 140/112/21
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 280
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1135



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       why is love complicated... 2day a gril winked or blinked with one eye in my direction, was it a signal, I must find out, and this will be hard, so any clures what I can do I want THOUGHTS+ADVICE ok thx


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    dotsLove(-2-)dots
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    Love…
    A complicated thing,
    Someone,
    Somewhere,
    Elsewhere,
    Is for you,
    Come across it,
    You’ll then be happy,

    How to find it?
    Is the problem,
    How do you know,
    When someone likes you,
    They send a signal,
    Maybe small,
    Even tiny,
    But it’s there,

    How do you know,
    That the signal isn’t a fake one,
    That it wasn’t a signal afterwards,
    That maybe they were just,
    Doing the signal,
    To someone else,

    How do you know,
    That maybe they winked,
    And not blinked,
    Maybe blinked with an eye,
    Investigate,
    Find out,

    Because,
    It might be,
    Your only true love,
    Go across all he problems,
    To find out it was real,
    Then learn about them,

    So go ahead,
    Try,
    Fall,
    Come back up,
    And maybe it’s then,
    That you will find,
    Your true love,
    It will help you get back up,
    And then you’ll be THE one,
    Who will be the happy one




    Submitted on 2005-11-29 16:23:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this was pretty good...the advice in this was simple but something that many overlook, the first one in this series wasn't your best this one wasn't either but it was okay and I look forward to reading your last one.
    peace
    | Posted on 2006-01-29 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
      first one.. was ok, second one, was ok, then 3rd one got weird. try finding new subjectsa other than love...

    | Posted on 2005-12-10 00:00:00 | by Venom | [ Reply to This ]
      Next time you see the girl wink at her and see it she responds back. I don't know! I do like your poem though, I'm always amazed how in tuned all you young ones are with the heart. I like when you write "So go ahead, try, fall , come back up, andmaybe it's then, That you will find, your true love. Good advice.

    God Bless,
    lynn

    | Posted on 2005-11-29 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]



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