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    dots Submission Name: did i mention i dont do titles?dots
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    Author: lovefatal
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 22/38/19
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 232
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    Description:
       this was half inspired by a movie i saw in chemistry, & half inspired by something my teacher asked me to read called "is love an art?" strange? i'd say. as far as feedback....if you're actually concerned with what i'm looking for, read my bio. otherwise, just give it a go. enjoy.


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    dotsdid i mention i dont do titles?dots
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    love is like nothing - i dont understand the childlike maturity with which she says "i love you" & behind it she lacks reason - she feels it & thats enough.
    the way her body heat presses & tortures, a touch produces a fatal supernova that she'll never live down.
    be alive now - be courageous.
    because tomorrow you'll wake up & nothing will have changed
    be partial, take notice, do you love artfully?
    when you're not sleeping are you wishing to be practicing, are you taking for granted what you should be regretting, its inevitable that we just wont care.
    but back you come like the ghost of a star - the ghost of a good thing or something i never wanted .




    Submitted on 2005-11-29 17:41:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You are one of a kind ... has anybody ever told you that??? I've just read your Bio and got puzzled... now I don't know what to say about this current write... at first it seems as if you were flat out disregarding love... which may be your own view but I don't agree when people do that - but then again I do respect different points of view, you might say ... “I couldn't care less" ... lol …….then you allegedly move onto criticizing the routine like lives we lead to finish with another apparently pejorative remark against love... dunno ... I may have gotten it all wrong ... but I least I strove to understand didn't I ??? I guess that's something.

    Kind regards,

    Ethan.
    | Posted on 2006-02-10 00:00:00 | by Ethan Brody | [ Reply to This ]
      Some people don't do comments do they? I like your work fine, and you should write for yourself, this is a good thing, but i just feel that the reader would benefit from a title. The beauty of free will though is that we can do what we want, so that means if you don't want to entitle your work you don't have to.
    | Posted on 2005-11-30 00:00:00 | by Martin S. Allen | [ Reply to This ]



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