I really liked this poem Its true we as humans seek stimulation in the form of anothers voice We always seek to Learn the answer to all our questions I took the last line make me wet by meaning soak me with your knowledge So it may sink in and create a brighter horizin Great write Take Care Ron
Yea, umm.. i really liked it, but im not sure how to take that last line ya' know? anyway, i especially liked the first stanza, maybe i like the "shut up" but i THINK i like the flow ;) lol. anyway, it was a very... alive poem and i liked it.
Wow, I don't know how you wanted us to take that last line but ok! I very much agree with this poem. Although the picture I got must be different from the picture intended. I pictured how everyone is all depressed write now, and how some of us think it gets old. Not that writing about depression is bad. But to wallow in it is a different story. This is a nice piece. I like the "fire" in it.