Dead and gone (never again)

Author: lucianraven ASL Info:    21/M/Spfld Il Elite Ratio:    3.46 - 49 /67 /19 Words: 73

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Dead and gone (never again)

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Anger , blood and tears, form a rock A glowing coal of hate Within my very soul Fists clenched with rage Pale blue frightened eyes Screams, unheard Mercy, ungiven Cold, calcuated action Bruises Pain Scars unseen Wounds unhealed Fear undefeatable A sweet, brave young girl never again who i once knew dead and gone replaced by shame by fear by guilt who i once knew dead and gone Dedicated to Zuri

Submitted on 2005-11-29 19:08:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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you write some many poems that are full of depth and pain, i hope your future brightens, i thought the way you layed oyt this piece, suited it very well, as you couldn't really put the words into stanza's, the words you used replyed over and over in my mind especially these lines... screams, unherd. mercy, ungiven. wonderful lines. ++My Pain++

| Posted on 2005-12-12 00:00:00 | by my pain | [ Reply to This ]

This is an incredible write from a young mine I dont know if it was the feeling you were going for but to me this write Was about someone who was looking at the male and female traits they have inside This write was very thought provoking Great Job! Take Care Ron

| Posted on 2005-11-30 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

This is an incredible write from a young mine I dont know if it was the feeling you were going for but to me this write Was about someone who was looking at the male and female traits they have inside This write was very thought provoking Great Job! Take Care Ron

| Posted on 2005-11-30 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

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