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Dead and gone (never again)


Author: lucianraven
ASL Info:    21/M/Spfld Il
Elite Ratio:    3.46 - 49 /67 /19
Words: 73
Class/Type: Rant /Venting
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If you read the description for "blood and tears" you'll get it.


Dead and gone (never again)



Anger ,
blood and tears,
form a rock
A glowing coal of hate
Within my very soul
Fists clenched with rage
Pale blue frightened eyes
Screams, unheard
Mercy, ungiven
Cold, calcuated action
Bruises
Pain
Scars unseen
Wounds unhealed
Fear undefeatable
A sweet, brave young girl
never again
who i once knew
dead and gone
replaced by shame
by fear
by guilt
who i once knew
dead and gone

Dedicated to Zuri




Submitted on 2005-11-29 19:08:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  you write some many poems that are full of depth and pain, i hope your future brightens, i thought the way you layed oyt this piece, suited it very well, as you couldn't really put the words into stanza's, the words you used replyed over and over in my mind especially these lines... screams, unherd. mercy, ungiven. wonderful lines.
++My Pain++
| Posted on 2005-12-12 00:00:00 | by my pain | [ Reply to This ]
  This is an incredible write from a young mine
I dont know if it was the feeling you were going for but to me
this write
Was about someone who was looking at the male and female traits they have inside

This write was very thought provoking
Great Job!
Take Care
Ron
| Posted on 2005-11-30 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  This is an incredible write from a young mine
I dont know if it was the feeling you were going for but to me
this write
Was about someone who was looking at the male and female traits they have inside

This write was very thought provoking
Great Job!
Take Care
Ron
| Posted on 2005-11-30 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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