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    dots Submission Name: I pray to goddots
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    Author: stormkrow
    ASL Info:    24/ male / Montello Wi
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 51/52/39
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsI pray to goddots
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    I plead and plead for him to answer my prayers
    when he dose I fear that it will be to late for me to change my ways I 'll be in to deep and I want to change so bad

    I want to be normal it would save me so many heartachs

    I plead and plead to be herd, I need to be herd
    if he dosen't answer my prairs then I 'll be lost forever .

    this is my prair to god

    GOD help me be "normal " and I 'll be good for the remainder of my life

    this is me pleading and pleading after my death

    Why lord why can't I come in???
    why.......




    Submitted on 2005-11-29 19:08:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like this. I know exactly how you feel about this. We all just plead to God asking his help and it seems so hard.

    I liked the last 2 lines. They were strong/deep. It really says alot. Keep it up. Good things will eventually happen.

    Meg
    | Posted on 2005-11-29 00:00:00 | by dreamer37517 | [ Reply to This ]


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