Abreast of things
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writing style is the norm 4 me.
topic came outa nowhere.she must have realllllllllly looked good lol
all does motivate
toyysruss
topic came outa nowhere.she must have realllllllllly looked good lol
all does motivate
toyysruss
Abreast of things
We're the ones,who usually get soaped first And we're the ones,who usually get grouped first And by the way,we sure can quench a thrist Oh,that hurts.......... Being a guys.... Is not the most spectacular We are the homeless We wear hair for warmth There's twisters all in the area. It takes 50 years for them to grow And that's a bad thing. Ah!!!!To be a woman's........ A home we have Seperate rooms Everyone loves to come to our house In this area,no twisters are to be found Just gentle breezes,massages all the time. Take them out.get thousands of dollars Spent on us.Always the center of attention We're so loved We're the ones,who make it in the door first We're the ones,Who quenches mankinds thrist And thinking of them,is making my head hurt..... ....I'll have a migraine-thank you |
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I'm in a good mood today, so when I saw "comedy," I just had to read it.  That was... lol well, it was different. Very creative, I must say. The way you worded it is excellent. I like it. It made me smile. You are quite talented Great job! Ooo thank you for the comment and favorites add too Yay I have a fan lol You are too awesome.You brightened my day, dear. Thanks again -nikkki | Posted on 2006-01-15 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ] | ty 4 comment on abreast of things.it was a different topic 4 me=lol.a first to do with anything sexual.it took 5 min to write and i thought it was descent. | toyysruss | Posted on 2005-12-01 00:00:00 | by toyysruss | [ Reply to This ] | I like this | Its a different kind of write then what im used to reading It does carry a lot of emotion I cant help but go back to that old song The female of the species is more deadly then the male I dont remember who sang it thou Great write Take Care Ron | Posted on 2005-11-30 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ] | Hmmm, almost the exact opposite of "penis envy" I like it! | A very subtle little wit in here, it needs to be read closely to see all the work you put in there, I reckon you did a top job! be happy Graeme | Posted on 2005-11-29 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ] | this is a most original piece. I love how you put the genders in their own seperate groups with their own seperate metaphors. "I'll have a migraine-thank you" this was my favorite line of the poem. Nice work, keep it up, and I'll be reading more! | Jussy | Posted on 2005-11-29 00:00:00 | by Jussy | [ Reply to This ] | |
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