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    dots Submission Name: . : ZAO - THE RISING END (THEdots
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    Author: snufthepunk28
    ASL Info:    21/f/ak
    Elite Ratio:    4.5 - 244/178/68
    Words: 216
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 950
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1413



    Description:
       one of thee best band i know of. here is the lyircs. if you want to see the video go to http://www.ferretstyle.com/therisingend/
    this band zao inpires me a lot....


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    dots. : ZAO - THE RISING END (THEdots
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    Bombs rain down like heaven's tears
    The Earth shall die and disappear
    And today, we wish the skies were grey
    For now they're just black and empty

    Ripped and turn from inside out
    Things too dark to think about
    No miracles
    No bleeding hands
    God has parted

    Bombs rain down like heaven's tears
    The Earth shall die and disappear
    And today, we wish the skies were grey
    For now they're just black and empty

    And when the end, she comes
    Rains down on everyone
    Fire from the sky
    And when the end, she rides
    Breathing out suicide
    Life and death are one
    And when the end, she comes
    Rains down on everyone
    Fire from the sky
    And when the end, she rides
    Breathing out suicide
    Life and death are one

    As a flame burns to touch the sky
    So it shall be with man's cry
    And this night all will pass away

    And when the end, she comes
    Rains down on everyone
    Fire from the sky
    And when the end, she rides
    Breathing out suicide
    Life and death are one
    And when the end, she comes
    Rains down on everyone
    Fire from the sky
    And when the end, she rides
    Breathing out suicide
    Life and death are one




    Submitted on 2005-11-29 22:13:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I really like this
    I can tell this band is extremely talented
    To me they were singing about eternal life
    Very powerful
    I will check out there website
    Thanks for letting us know about them
    Ron
    | Posted on 2005-11-30 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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