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    dots Submission Name: Don't Forget Medots
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    Author: tinkerbellsas
    ASL Info:    22/f/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 67/66/32
    Words: 307
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 906
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    Bytes: 1978



    Description:
       Just a poem about falling out of love


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    dotsDon't Forget Medots
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    I love you
    But I can't do this any more
    I don't know how to explain it
    I don't know what to say
    All I know is that it's over
    I don't feel that way anymore
    I don't feel the chills from your kiss
    I don't shiver when you touch me
    I was so in love with you
    But something changed
    Something I never saw coming
    I don't know what it is
    I don't know where it came from
    But, when I look at you now
    I don't feel the same desire
    I feel nothing like I used to
    I don't know how to fix it
    Believe me, I wish I could
    The only thing I know to do
    Is say good bye to you
    It hurts so much to say this
    But it hurts worse to keep pretending
    Pretending everything's the same
    Making you believe what's not true
    The last thing I want to do
    Is hurt you, so please don't cry
    I don't think I could handle
    Seeing tears from your eyes
    Trust me I've cried enough
    Tears for both of us
    Just keep in mind
    Maybe things can change
    Maybe I'll feel that way again
    I'm so confused
    I don't know what's happening
    Anything is possible
    But, please don't wait for me
    Don't put your life on hold
    I know you love me
    And if it's true love
    I'll live with the joy
    That I'll always be in your heart
    As you will in mine
    So, just try to move on with your life
    Someday fate may bring us together again
    Or maybe it's meant to be this way
    Either way, remember : I still love you
    Just live in the memories
    In the happiness we've shared
    I'll always think about you
    I'll always care
    So, please I beg of you
    Don't forget me




    Submitted on 2005-11-29 23:58:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This has incredible truth in it. I mean, it's the feeling of when you thought you were in love, but maybe just lust? And, now you just don't know why it's falling apart or that feeling is drifting away. I have felt this way so many times before, and it's a sad thing that the other person has to hear it. But then again, you know you guys had the best of times together. Just as something less than in a relationship. Great work! I enjoyed it.
    | Posted on 2005-12-24 00:00:00 | by misleadxmyheart | [ Reply to This ]
      i really really like this! its really sad but im glad u told him instead of being like otha ppl and just ignore him or lead him on a path not thats not real for da both of you! enjoyed reading this! good job!
    ~akaila evonne~
    | Posted on 2005-12-13 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
      If that is how you feel, then you were never really in love in the first place. REAL true romantic love, remains in the heart forever and never leaves. Sounds to me like you were describing infatuation, a crush, or a run of the mill love - but certainly not true love.

    I enjoyed reading your write none the less
    | Posted on 2005-11-30 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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