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    dots Submission Name: Infatuationdots
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    Author: tinkerbellsas
    ASL Info:    22/f/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 67/66/32
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 524
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    Bytes: 801



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    My life was so complete
    I didn't need any body
    I was quite content
    Living the simple life

    Then I found out about you
    You turned my world upside down
    Now I need you more than anything
    I'd give everything I own just to feel your touch

    I can't live without you
    This is more than just a simple crush
    I'm infatuated
    Even though we aren't together

    I would do anything for you
    I'd die if that's what you wanted
    Anything to make you happy
    Making you happy is my only goal

    There are so many things that I want
    But your the only one that really matters
    I'll die if I can't have you
    I truly do love you




    Submitted on 2005-11-30 00:02:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      What love can do to you, no one knows. It depends on the type of person you are, and that can do something about how you will be affected by it. Did that make sense?
    This was a great write, I'd like to see more.

    -Shadow
    | Posted on 2005-12-02 00:00:00 | by Lavender | [ Reply to This ]
      The power of love is indescribable. That is what you are saying here and that love is all. I completely agree with you. An excelent write.
    | Posted on 2005-11-30 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Would you really die if you don't land your guy? I don't think so. I know lots of cuties that I would love to have, but I know that I can't make them love me. it's their choice. love is a strange bed fellow lol.
    | Posted on 2005-11-30 00:00:00 | by hotrodruss | [ Reply to This ]


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