Description: say nahlij... take what you want man, or tell me if you want something else..
to everybody who cares to read what i submit..
sorry it has took so long.
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drunk ass fiend, back in the scene
back to the streets, back to this forum
bottle of heinessy, tripping alarms
looking over my shoulder
ready to drop a bomb
beats running through my head
lyrics biting at the bit
like a ticking time bomb
DYR through dem bos
bitch slap dez hoes
riding two miles an hour
dis shit is so sour
forgive me for splitting yo girls flower
we got this niggas we aint went nowhere
we got this shit our pens aint disappeared
we got this shit let's ride
2 cocked and clicked, let it spit
Like a nigga in the clan
sticking out like a sore thumb
a treasure rarely scene
a white boy from the ghetto scene
riding with yakuza
ill have you begging for your life
with a bend of my thumb
steel is replaced by the pen
to reach all you bitches across
the motherfucking globe
Don't make a scene
as you see us ride by
With the sum of your bank account
hanging from our earlobes
Mad hot again. The only thing...don't get me wrong from this...I flow too...as you already know...some blacks could get offended my a white rapper spittin the word nigga. *shrugs* I'm not taking it the wrong way...but I know how some people work...especially because I am the only white person that lives where I live...and the only white person out of all of my friends. They don't let it bother them if a hispanic or any other interracial...minority..says that...but for just any white to say it...they do.
I give you mad props for this. I really do. But, Li Li will always keep it real. ALWAYS.
Yeah, that was hot. I really got into the rhythm of the lyrics. It's a good thing for a reader to be able to nod their head and feel what you're saying. The only thing is that you need to revise this. You had a few grammatical errors, and I'm not talking about the slang words. I'm talking about Hennessy. How in the hell can yo uspell Hennessy wrong. Hennessy hennessy hennessy hennessy hennessy hennessy hennessy hennessy hennessy! See, it ain't that hard. Oh and work on the rhyme. But, good [censored] anyway.
welcome back. it's been a while homie. i see u still got it and yeah i agree. dyr will rise from the ashes. we can't be stopped. i'm glad pj started this [censored]. good job cade. this [censored] was hot