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    dots Submission Name: I cry for N.Odots
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    Author: solemnpen
    ASL Info:    18
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 303/339/42
    Words: 285
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 992
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1748



    Description:
       This piece should explain itself...

    My heart goes out to unknown soldier and Aknahlij_d1...

    And for everybody else that was tried by katrina and rita.

    Even though it's a website, and we sharing our talents and our interests..

    You never quite understand something, until you almost lose it..


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    dotsI cry for N.Odots
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    Sitting here wondering what the fuck imma do
    a few hundred miles away and there aint shit i can do
    hearts go their own ways,
    but for my dawgs this shit is so true
    Ruling the scene together, overcoming the weather
    Repping N.O from central LA, shit has just got better
    Strand of rope tested but not broken
    There is still some words that are unspoken

    You don't know what its like
    to see tragedy strike your peoples life
    I cry for N.O
    2 good friends tested and standing true
    I cry for N.O
    If we ever was doubted, now all them bitches know
    I cry for N.O

    Opportunity of abundance
    Collaborations from here to London
    My heart pours with the rain
    My tears took away by the wind
    It's got a soldier thinking insane
    Got me thinking did we lose or win?
    took a few weeks to relax
    to come back to find
    My boys still doing it big
    Troy, PJ, my love is connected to this pen
    dedicated to this shoutout without bragging on sin
    Withstood all that motherfucking wind
    To see my boys standing tall in Texas
    Still running this arena
    As we all 3 stand together and say Fuck Katrina

    You don't know what its like
    to see tragedy strike your boys life
    I cry for N.O
    2 good friends tested and standing true
    I cry for N.O
    If we ever was doubted, now all them bitches know
    I cry for N.O
    Nobody knows how I felt, knowing that yakuza
    was tried
    I cry for N.O
    Already battle tested, and now we have braved lifes lesson, still standing true
    I cry for N.O




    Submitted on 2005-11-30 10:40:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hi Cade, it's been awhile since I read your work. I thought I take apeek at what you been doing and man am I impressed. now about this song. I loved it! I to am from Louisiana and it hit me as if my own home was destroyed. I feel you in every line of these lyrics. you not only mentioned what happened but you boosted the morale of those still stranded from home. Your lyrics invited the reader to feel the courage you were asking all of N.O. to have and keep. Very powerful and real. I have a fav.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-01-26 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      DAMN! you still got that same talent! and your words are really deep!

    i'm speechless...and have nothing good to say

    but this was really deep!
    | Posted on 2005-12-20 00:00:00 | by Kay | [ Reply to This ]
      This was hot! H-O-T!

    Even though I am as hard as I am...I still cry. I'm a very sensitive person at heart...sometimes my heart despises my mind for the way it acts and thinks! LMAO!

    I really like this one. REALLY! My favorite line...

    To see my boys standing tall in Texas
    Still running this arena
    As we all 3 stand together and say [censored] Katrina


    DO YOUR THANG PIMPIN!

    Much love,

    Li
    | Posted on 2005-12-05 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      yo thanx for the shoutout. much love cade.

    yo i still flow for N.O.
    get dough, never stop get mo'
    didn't heed the hurricane's bluff
    i think that we've suffered enough
    niggas swim through 7 feet of water
    drowning women and children
    this is an elemental slaughter
    natural disasters are [censored]s
    Katrina brought destruction
    that [censored] came faster than Nascar

    thanx for the write cade. much love
    | Posted on 2005-11-30 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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