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    dots Submission Name: Cuffs And Whipsdots
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    Author: vanhokinshtyl
    ASL Info:    8/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 119/200/71
    Words: 237
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 759
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1887



    Description:
       YOU CAN LISTEN TO THIS AT: www.soundclick.com/theyouknowwhats (but I'm warning you that it really is poor quality and sounds really bad, but I'm just telling you I have a copy of it on the internet, oh and yes, I am playing bass and (horribly) singing.

    I wrote this song in like I think 9th grade for the band I was in. I know that it's poorly written, but it's supposed to (again) be humorous. Yeah, I never really had a girlfriend like this...if you were wondering. Yeah, this song is about a girlfriend who is a sadomasochist.


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    She was dangerous
    when in contact,
    it was tenderness
    she lacked,
    bonding through bondage,
    I soon will be chastened,
    but first she makes sure,
    I'm tightly fastened
    She treats me like a soldier
    in the military,
    I never thought a girl
    could be so scary,
    "What shall it be
    your majesty?"
    She said
    "Give it all to me!!!"

    My girlfriend was perfect
    from mom's perspective,
    it was the kind of girl
    dad had suggested,
    but looks can be deceiving,
    defined as correct,
    my parents' think
    my girlfriend's perfect

    I'm tantalized
    by word of mouth,
    she's a bird for winter
    headed south,
    after dinner
    she'll have dessert,
    she loves me,
    but God, love hurts!
    This lust and violence
    is too much,
    she's terse,
    she skipped
    breakfast and lunch,
    her cuffs and whips
    are keeping me down
    "What do you wish,
    queen wearing the crown?"

    My dominatrix,
    I'm enslaved
    by your
    cuffs and whips

    "Your behavior is erratic...
    with erotic,
    I hate to admit it,
    but you're psychotic,
    you get pleasure
    from pain,
    thoughts of anguish
    in your brain,
    How did I get
    a girlfriend like you?"

    My girlfriend was perfect
    from mom's perspective,
    it was the kind of girl
    dad had suggested,
    but looks can be deceiving,
    defined as correct,
    I used to think that
    my girlfriend was perfect...

    (and now I can't leave her,
    she might just hurt me more)




    Submitted on 2005-11-30 12:21:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is my favorite vures "Your behavior is erratic...
    with erotic,
    I hate to admit it,
    but you're psychotic,
    you get pleasure
    from pain,
    thoughts of anguish
    in your brain,
    How did I get
    a girlfriend like you?"
    cause pain can turn me on
    | Posted on 2005-12-08 00:00:00 | by DrewDilla | [ Reply to This ]
      this is pretty damn funny, it reminds me of the greenday song, is that bad, i wanna be your dominated loveslave, pretty good too. i didn't listnen to your music but this is really great. I'll have to check out your other posts.
    | Posted on 2005-12-04 00:00:00 | by graeme | [ Reply to This ]
      LMFAO! This was great, I really, really, really loved reading this, I'll try and listen to it later, okay? You make me laugh so much. This was like this helpless guy who seems like such a victim, lol, it's so funny!
    | Posted on 2005-12-03 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]
      LoL
    This is awesome. You're one of the few people on here that keeps up with the comedy!
    And I'll make sure to listen to that some other time when I'm not in class.
    I used to know a girl like that...back when I was a freshman...but she was awesome...
    Anyway, lol. Keep Writing!
    -Caribou-
    | Posted on 2005-12-02 00:00:00 | by painofthanatos | [ Reply to This ]
      "And headed south" or "always headed south"i like this one alot good rythem and could be set to music with slight arangeing
    | Posted on 2005-11-30 00:00:00 | by papalegba | [ Reply to This ]
      I Think I get this write
    You to me are referring to how much your life has changed since you met this girl
    I feel you felt she was controling your very life
    I good write that shows a lot of thinking when i take into consideration
    You were only about 13 writing this
    Im amazed
    Take Care
    Ron
    | Posted on 2005-11-30 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      thats really sexy hell id do her lol. any way yea your right it is pritty porly written. but their is some rather good imagry in here ; )

    xoxo
    that girl
    | Posted on 2005-12-11 00:00:00 | by sweet sorenity | [ Reply to This ]


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