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    dots Submission Name: Is it my only turn?dots
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    Author: Dark_Angel
    ASL Info:    13/F/Umm.. Poo?
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 21/32/15
    Words: 324
    Class/Type: Misc/Longing
    Total Views: 1036
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       I just kept wondering and thinking.. I wonder and think.. Of what life is,what death is,why we are like this,why we are like that,why we are so cold,why we are so kind,why we are here,why we are there..Why are we even anywhere?


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    dotsIs it my only turn?dots
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    The blood that bleeds
    The fires that burn
    Is it only my turn?

    the creature of the night
    That flies in the light
    Is it only my turn?

    Tried to cry
    Through dry eyes
    Is it only my turn?

    Tried to smile
    Buthaven't been happy for awhile
    Is it only my turn?

    I tried being happy
    I tried being normal
    Is it only my turn?

    God picked me as something
    But I feel as nothing
    Is it only my turn?

    It is only my turn
    To be God's torture toy?
    To be Fate play thing?
    To be in the Devil snare?

    Is it only my turn
    To cry?
    To lie?
    To die?

    Is it only my turn
    To be played with?
    To be picked?
    To be placed?

    Is it only my turn
    To bleed in the light?
    To breath in the night?
    To smile at your fright?

    Is it only my turn
    To boil?
    To burn?
    To close?

    Is it only my turn
    To feel nothing?
    To know no love?
    To play among the dead?

    Is it only my turn
    To yern?
    To please?
    To be on my hands and knees?

    It seems I'm everything
    It seems I'm nothing
    It seems I'm anything
    It seems I'm something.

    I seem to see
    I seem to be
    I seem to smile
    I seem to cry

    I seem dead
    I seem alive
    I seem bad
    I seem good.

    I seem to know
    That it is only my turn
    To walk lonely
    To have one yern..

    And that one yern
    In my only turn
    Is that I can die
    Is that I can live
    Is that I can love
    Is that I can hate
    Is that I can be cold
    Is that I can be kind.

    You are yours
    And I am mine..
    I know this
    On my only turn.




    Submitted on 2005-11-30 18:48:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This touched me very deeply.. i ponder these things everyday...it is almost scary that so many people have the same thoughts, isn't it? i love how you kept trying to point out that you thought it was ony happening you you. it added to the poem. It reminds me of when i am depressed. which is most of the time. i begin to believe that i am the only one that god anf fate [censored] with and that i don't belong here...i really did enjoy this and i don't believe i can think if anything that i would want to change or a way to show just how deep in my soul i felt this. wonderful job

    Akai_Ame
    | Posted on 2005-11-30 00:00:00 | by Akai_Ame | [ Reply to This ]


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