eyes of the morning dew

Author: salvete Elite Ratio:    5.34 - 3 /3 /3 Words: 38

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eyes of the morning dew

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in the eyes of the morning dew i remember the innocence of walking barefoot with soft pretense while lost sadness found my laugh

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Nothing good can ever last. Everything seems so perfect and innocent; dream it will stay that way forever, but once again, ...lost sadness found my laugh it fades away. You make it sound so gentle and peaceful...it slowly slips away. Short, but sweet, this piece is wonderful. -Cari

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