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Me, My Thoughts And My Words


Author: Tarek Refaat
ASL Info:    24/m/Egypt
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Me, My Thoughts And My Words



Me, My Thoughts And My Words


The moment my fingers touch the keyboard
Is the moment where all my thoughts are set free
Like a ranging fire across a hay field..

Moving swiftly and moving fast
With such gentleness and easiness
It never occurred to me
There would be a writer inside of me

An adventurer perhaps
And observer maybe
An analyzer, a must

But never a writer
Although I love dancing with the words
And finding the expressions
And touching the meaning
A teasing the feelings

And once I start to write
It feels, so completely right
Usually my eyes would shine bright
Like a cool breeze on a hot night

Filled with eagerness
Filled with enthusiasm
Filled with joy
Filled with pride
Filled a sense of satisfaction
Beyond my mind

When I reach the end of the thoughts
It slows down very calmly
And ends very smoothly
This is what I’m today
This is who I will be tomorrow

Me,
My Thoughts,
And My Words




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  i like this a lot, I am sura anyomne that writes will undersatnd this, and relate it to the first moments of discovering that thoughts flow on a blank peice of paper, or screen,or other moments, where it becomes a nessesity to carry around a book, a pen, something to write in when out of nowwhere thoughts come and they need to be written.,
| Posted on 2005-12-01 00:00:00 | by mimi | [ Reply to This ]
  I like this work because it explains what some of us are like in our creative process. Almost an empty shell until we sit at our computer or with pen/paper in hand and then the thoughts and words flow until they can't anymore. The last line of the 4th verse is the A suppose to be And because it sounds a little off.
| Posted on 2005-12-01 00:00:00 | by auntwheezie | [ Reply to This ]


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