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Submission Name: EMO dots

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Author:	stateXofXmind
ASL Info:	18/F
Elite Ratio:	2.09 - 29/49/21
Words:	77

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	364
Average Vote:	3.0000
Bytes:	466

Description:
i dedicate this one to poor lil emo kids who cant find love,

EMO

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In the year the sun turned black,
and the clouds drifted down to the cold world,
and hell's demons walk the earth,trying to find fresh love,to feast off of, because in this day love is useless,unwanted,unuesd,
everyone in the world hates,kills,dies,for this world is pale and cold,and people wander the earth in depression, cuts on their arms, and fire in their eyes, what is a world with out love, and what is love without a world?

Submitted on 2005-12-01 09:00:22 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  EMO!*points EMO! *poits EMO *poits

jkfl

funny poem
| Posted on 2006-10-19 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
  Poor Emo kids.......
| Posted on 2006-08-31 00:00:00 | by Valle_Siddious | [ Reply to This ]
  It has great depth to it.
Catching my attention with your thoughts.
I understand, this is a world of scarred arms and torn spirits.
Spirits can be mended.
But scars are for forever.
Write on.

Valle_Siddious
| Posted on 2006-08-31 00:00:00 | by Valle_Siddious | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a really good poem. I like it alot. It's short but it's to the point. It's lovely because it really doesn't need to be that long. It says all it needs to in those lines. I loved how you put the questions at the end. It was a great poem, keep it up.
| Posted on 2005-12-03 00:00:00 | by chaos_bite | [ Reply to This ]
  Short but great! i loved the way you ended the poem with questions. Its extremely truthful. I definately relate to this.Great job im adding this one to my faves! Great job!
| Posted on 2005-12-02 00:00:00 | by Brat05 | [ Reply to This ]
  Like the meaning of it, mostly reminding the world is useless, how useless it is. In short words you did a nice job of reminding me of this.
| Posted on 2005-12-02 00:00:00 | by rAbit | [ Reply to This ]
  wow i strongly agree with you. awesome piece. Yeh i liked the whole poem and can say yes it is relatable. Keep up the good work i hope to read more of your works in the near future.

Love, Serinity Blade
| Posted on 2005-12-01 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow... tht was awsome i like it alot its so lovely and truthful its nice and short but it says alot in the few lines and i like the way it was put together. i really like how it ends it just soo philaphicalness and i love it yes
| Posted on 2005-12-01 00:00:00 | by gothicgirl | [ Reply to This ]

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