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    dots Submission Name: TELL ME WHYdots
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    Author: papalegba
    ASL Info:    45/male/schenectady ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 52/42/28
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 722
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsTELL ME WHYdots
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    TELL ME WHY
    FOOD AND CLOTHING
    GET SENT STRIGHT AWAY
    WHEN SUFFERING HAPPENS ACROSS THE SEAS

    TELL ME WHY
    WHEN IT HAPPENS AT HOME
    ALL OUR PEOPLE GET THE SHAFT
    BECAUSE BOMBS ARE FIRST

    TELL ME WHY
    ALL THE KILLING STARTS
    BY ORDERS FROM THE HOUSE
    AT 1600 IN THE DISTRICT

    PEOPLE THAT LOST THEIR JOBS
    HOMES AND BUSSINESS'S
    THAT SEE NO FUNDS TO RESTART
    SHOULD GO TO IRAQ

    FOR THEIR THEY CAN FIND
    ALL THE TAINTED MONEY
    FROM THE SHRUB NUMBER 43
    AND I THINK THIS FAIR AND BALLANCED

    LOOK FOR THE ANSWERS
    AND FOR THE PRAYERS
    ALL WE SEE IS THE HATRED
    FROM THE GIFTS IN 2000 AND IN FOUR

    this is just a service message from god and buddah and the rest at the table




    Submitted on 2005-12-01 11:22:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm a little turned off by all capitals, because though I know you're angry, writitng in all capitals is considered shouting, and I think everyone here will listen. I also think you need to go back and proofread this because you have some misspellings. I agree with a lot of your points. I think the war is stupid, our economy is still weak, the Katrina victims are still getting a bum deal, etc. I'm not sure that our government is helping out as much overseas as we are led to believe; we're the stingiest industrialized nation, but I give to every disaster relief fund I can. The stupidest thing I hear people say about out current situation is that even when told that this war is fought based upon lies, they say that Hussein is a bad guy. Well, duh, but there are genocidal nutjobs in power elsewhere, and we've not batted an eyelash. Anyway, nice write, Amy
    | Posted on 2005-12-02 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really good
    You expressed yourself very well in this write
    I for one admire you for talking about the important things in Life
    Great Write
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2005-12-01 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      You made some good points, good announcement, as far as a poems worth, i think it could be better. But then again, you seem more concerned peopel get the message rather than find the poetic form in it. Either way, great write.
    | Posted on 2005-12-01 00:00:00 | by Mercy December | [ Reply to This ]


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