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    dots Submission Name: Suicidal Moraldots
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    Author: Frivilous _
    ASL Info:    17/M/Colo.
    Elite Ratio:    3.73 - 26/18/12
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 295
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 390



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       Bitchez and hoez.


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    dotsSuicidal Moraldots
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    Blood and ash fall faint to the floor,
    Staring, concealed behind a locked door,
    Silver light shining bright and blinding,
    Pending on death and all of it's bindings,
    The blade becomes a crimson glow,
    As you move the razor to and fro,
    Feeling faint, just catch your breath,
    After all it's only death.







    Submitted on 2005-12-01 11:24:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I really like this, the imagery and the easy rhyming. This is the only one of your poems that seems thought out and careful. f.ucking great though.
    | Posted on 2007-04-02 00:00:00 | by Waywarddaughter | [ Reply to This ]
      OH MY [censored]ING GOD I LOVED THIS POEM IT IS POSSIBLY MY FAV OUT OF ALL OF THEM. ROCKINAWESOME. [censored] TASTIC. LATER.
    | Posted on 2007-03-16 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]
      Its great, i like the topic death is probably the easy/most common thing to write about i like it i dont really no if i like the title its kinda in the middle of like and hate but hey thats just my opion
    | Posted on 2005-12-04 00:00:00 | by Brat05 | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like how you ended it with sarcasm, it had good emotional words, so i could visualize a picture in my head, sort of like you are the angel of death watching someone kill themselves and taunting them on. good job!
    | Posted on 2005-12-02 00:00:00 | by Fadeintoreality | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow i can say i liked this one it was a great piece. I dont really have a favorite part i think i liked the whole thing. Keep up the good work i hope to read more of your works.

    Love, Serinity Blade
    | Posted on 2005-12-01 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]
      hey [censored] this peaice suxs naw jus playing write me or DIE from my rath obtw i liked ur poem
    NIce so swwet and loving and all ya...
    | Posted on 2005-12-01 00:00:00 | by gothicgirl | [ Reply to This ]



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