I completely feel this and love what you've written here. I love the whole idea (because I relate), and where you tie in the description of the doll - so fragile - in contrast to how other people see you as strong. It takes a lot of trust to learn to let down the walls, huh? I feel you. Good job Jessica (parabola)
What is with today, and every single poem reminding me of me and my friends fight?! I'm getting so frustrated tears are comeing- NO POURING out of my eyes! But this was good really does say alot about so many people. This gave me another thing to think about. Still I find it strange that every thing I read and comment on just keeps reminding me and putting me into a worse shape. I'm not blaming your for anything! I love your work, and every thing. Loved your poem, and loved the imagery, and the way you used inanimate objects to explain things. Love when people do that.
Hmmm to me it seems people think you are too mentally strong and phyiscally strong and you don't want to have it anymore. You want to be fragile and delicate so if anyone were to touch you, you would break down and be hurt. I'm so sure as if I understand that but oh well. That was just what I got from this anyways.
I didn't see anything wrong with this structure wise or anything. The flow was good and I followed this easily. Good job. .
This is a moving write It really made me think I believe you are letting out your emotions and tears thru your writes You are reaching out for someone to understand your feelings I do understand what you are saying and Know We are always learning in life As we learn we are questioning the knowledge we are given That is what I think you are going thru Remain Positive Your writes are very emotional and I always like reading them Take Care Your Friend Ron
Freakin' right. Sounds like something I'd write, although it's your own. And, that's what makes it special. I enjoyed reading this because I can relate to it. You just want to stand up on a chair in the middle of a crowded room with your friends and scream, "YOU KNOW WHAT I'M NOT AS HAPPY AS I'M ACTING! I'M SOBBING ON THE INSIDE! I'M GOING TO FALL APART NOW!"