Description: Okay, this is my very firstest poem.
I did edit it, but I didn't want to change too much.
I just want to keep it how it is 'cuase...like I said...my first poem.
It's about my 3rd ex.
Let Go -------------------------------------------
Let go of my hand
because you do not need me anymore.
Let go of all the things I have said to you
because I never meant to say them to you in the first place.
Let go of all the memories of you and me
because they fade away over time.
Let go of all the pictures we took together
because there are no meanings behind them.
Let go of all the letters I have written you
because they are just lifeless words.
Let go of all the songs you have written for me
because I did not understand them anyway.
Let go of the images of my face
because you will not be seeing me for a while.
Let go of how I used to touch you
because that was so long ago.
Let go of how I would look at you
because my eyes are always looking away.
Let go of the long conversations we had
because we had nothing to talk about.
Let go of the phone calls
becasue I will not be home.
Let go of how I used to be there
because I will not.
This was great. It showed alot of emotion and true feelings that i too am feeling right now. Its like you don't want someomne to be so dependant on you, they need to grow and foind other people...
That's just what i got from it...Keep up the writting. I'm stalking you so i will never miss a post. ^_^ lol
Ex who won't let go? Or self advice? You sound kind of like this girl I know. She broke up with this guy and there was nothing. THat was good for her. Then now he is always calling and visiting. She doesn't want it in the least.
THe flow was superb. It sounded like you said it in a nice enough voice but you were glad you said it. I wonder if that's me, you, or the poem???
Submission Name: Let Go
