Description: Words slowy passed through my mind, and here it is written. I have vague ideas what it's about, but I feel like I've known it forever. Just another one of those things....
I've noticed that all the poetry that I've read of your's is in the same format. I question how much you can really grow as poet staying in this same style. Anyways, to this specific peice. I like the title, but the connection between it and the poem is very loose. However, I do think the poem is very interesting. My favorite line is " Just one more lost tomorrow". Good write overall.
verry profound. actually quite interesting. I enjoyed it, the rythem and flow. The words you used were exquisite and verry entrancing. And the way you portrayed cutting as a torn smile was nicely done. It seems as if there is more than one message to be percieved from this poem and it could take a while to get them all out. Great work.
very good i do recomend avoiding cutting a lot of people will "cut " you down if you use it never the less it was a great peom the imagry was exalent wording was astounding and i cant spell
please comment on my work i love you forever and stuff
Submission Name: Shattered Whispers
