Sometimes stuff you read has the ability to keep your eyes on the text even when all the rest of your senses are begging you to stop. Uncomfortable and intensely personal as the words are, ignoring them is not really an option, '(cept to the most hard hearted or indifferent....)
First, I want to say I'm sorry this happen to your friend and also for what was done to you. These are powerful words for a young person. I hope that your friend and you are getting some kind of help to cope with this. Now, the poem was very good. A sensitive subject that you made very easy for us the readers to understand and feel the pain in each line. It was like being in a dream. I also can feel the anger in the poem. Rape is something that is painful to face, hard to let go of, and scary to live with. There is a light at the end of the dark road you think you are on. Everyday you wake up, you win, because you are still fighting. Keep writing.
wow! the ending is powerfull! good job! im sry this happened to ur friend! thats really sad! im sry about wat happened to u 2! this was awesome! and powerfull and filled with emotion! ~akaila evonne~
Submission Name: blood again
