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    dots Submission Name: sit down shut up ENOUGHdots
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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 647/1072/602
    Words: 291
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       i hate it when stupid people try to say haha youre a satanist or a goth or something when im not. this isnt one of those oh no dont judge me because im soo unique things because im not. im just not all the stupid things they call me.


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    dotssit down shut up ENOUGHdots
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    pierced and proud
    laughing through the breakdown
    labels are pathetically degrading
    but persist if you believe youre clever enough
    to stuff everything i am
    into a word or two
    never mind
    desist
    youre just not clever at all are you?
    do you think you can possible percieve me correctly
    by reading all of the tattoos
    or t-shirts
    ha
    i think not
    no angry slogan could express who i am
    and exactly what it is i represent

    silly girl dont try and judge me
    youre only going to confuse yourself
    dont even try to criticize
    youre too stupid to pronounce it right
    back up, back down
    dont make me be serious dearest
    ill only make you cry
    and unlike you
    im not in the mood for drama

    sugar sugar please sit down
    be quiet and stop making a spectacle of yourself
    dont you realize your just not right?
    honey honey please shut your mouth
    before i shut it for you
    dont you recognize humor when you see it
    well anyways its funny to me
    you stand here and call me all these things
    trying to make me out to be insane
    or at least uncivilized
    but now you stand in a puddle of tears
    so upset with me for spelling the insults right
    darling im sorry youre so stupid
    but im not sorry for being honest

    pierced and proud
    but not unintelligent
    havent you had enough yet?
    dont stand here and try to judge me
    when what i am is simply to much for you
    closeminded should be closemouthed
    so why dont you just backdown?
    sit down
    shut up
    havent you had enough?















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    ||| Comments |||
      But persist if you think you're inevating....? is that even a word?
    LOVE the last stanza! just awed....
    i like the way you make it seem as though you're helping...it makes it funny....
    tis all.
    | Posted on 2006-10-28 00:00:00 | by ollie_wicked | [ Reply to This ]
      "pierced and proud" i love that line :)

    i love the kinda poetry that isnt all images, its saying it openly and out there

    you reli got ur message across
    | Posted on 2005-12-03 00:00:00 | by charl_girl | [ Reply to This ]
      Seems to me as though you have got the right idea about the world and the rest need to catch up. Not many people are willing to say anything close to what you said in this, they step back and let people walk all over them, but you haven't. I admire you for this piece, because you've spoken your opinions without pointing blaim or judgement.
    | Posted on 2005-12-02 00:00:00 | by MyHeart2Yours | [ Reply to This ]


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