People dont care what i say.
So I might as well shuy up cos no ones listening anyway.
My poetic side is going to waste.
Because its not the current taste.
So just because some people dont like it.
No ones ever going to hear it.
Its quite a shame.
And its all because people think its lame.
I never cared what people think.
But now it means my talent is going down the sink.
So bye bye poetry.
This is really good Do not give up on yourself Let the beauty of family and the World guide you To me it sounds like your giving up on yourself with this write I for one enjoy reading your words You may be young but that dosent matter Your words have meaning Writing lets the negativity escape from absorbing us Please do not stop writing Take Care Ron
mmm. keep it around for awhile. It helped me get through highschool. and who said poetry had to be appreciated by everybody? a lot of people disregard a lot of things...doesn't mean those things don't have value.
Well those people suck. They dont have to like it. Awesome poetry like yours is always welcome here. I know exactly what you mean though. I think about that a lot. A lot of people just arent interested, and that used to bother me (it still does sometimes cause I like to share lol), but I've almost gotten used to it. Like, I understand that people like different things. But... you know? Yeah.
A lot of people are gonna point out your spelling mistakes and punctuation all all that other stuff that isnt really important. I hate that. Its like... "thanks... its not an english essay, but ok." Sometimes I dont mind though if its only like one word or something. But you know what I mean. Anyways, this is written wonderfully. Its simple, but really says a lot. Oh my... I should go to bed. I never sleep. Thats no good. Oh well. lol Anywho (see how easily I get distracted?), Great job