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    dots Submission Name: Bye bye poetrydots

    Author: Brat05
    ASL Info:    15/f/australia
    Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 86/60/28
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsBye bye poetrydots

    People dont care what i say.
    So I might as well shuy up cos no ones listening anyway.
    My poetic side is going to waste.
    Because its not the current taste.
    So just because some people dont like it.
    No ones ever going to hear it.
    Its quite a shame.
    And its all because people think its lame.
    I never cared what people think.
    But now it means my talent is going down the sink.
    So bye bye poetry.

    Submitted on 2005-12-02 22:56:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hey! Don't go away! stick around.

    Look at all the comments you've recieved - Well recieved!

    You have talent. Don't let critiism get to you Even tho you didn't like my poem "Love Seat" * He sniffles, blows his nose and wipes his eyes* LOL

    | Posted on 2005-12-03 00:00:00 | by SHRINKSDR | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really good
    Do not give up on yourself
    Let the beauty of family and the World guide you
    To me it sounds like your giving up on yourself with this write
    I for one enjoy reading your words
    You may be young but that dosent matter
    Your words have meaning
    Writing lets the negativity escape from absorbing us
    Please do not stop writing
    Take Care
    | Posted on 2005-12-03 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Interesting piece of art.Maybe you will like to make it larger, extend it.But that is just my opinion.In any case, it`s a good work.
    | Posted on 2005-12-03 00:00:00 | by DAlin | [ Reply to This ]
      mmm. keep it around for awhile. It helped me get through highschool. and who said poetry had to be appreciated by everybody? a lot of people disregard a lot of things...doesn't mean those things don't have value.
    | Posted on 2005-12-03 00:00:00 | by sandaledfeet | [ Reply to This ]
      Well those people suck. They dont have to like it. Awesome poetry like yours is always welcome here. I know exactly what you mean though. I think about that a lot. A lot of people just arent interested, and that used to bother me (it still does sometimes cause I like to share lol), but I've almost gotten used to it. Like, I understand that people like different things. But... you know? Yeah.

    A lot of people are gonna point out your spelling mistakes and punctuation all all that other stuff that isnt really important. I hate that. Its like... "thanks... its not an english essay, but ok." Sometimes I dont mind though if its only like one word or something. But you know what I mean. Anyways, this is written wonderfully. Its simple, but really says a lot. Oh my... I should go to bed. I never sleep. Thats no good. Oh well. lol Anywho (see how easily I get distracted?), Great job

    | Posted on 2005-12-03 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]

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