I'm really sorry I cant give you any constructive criticism really. I think that it's unnecessary to tell us in the description that the "game" is love. It's a common enough anology that most people will get it. And otherwise it makes it a little more to think about. "Not fully contained just drifting" My thoughts are like that mostly. And this presents a problem a lot of people face without being cliché.
This is great-- you've caught hopelessness, confusion, and exasperation all in one piece, and it flows seamlessly together. The last stanza is my favorite by far.
I say this all the time, but I am a punctuation person. Everyone uses commas, periods, etc. at their own discretion, but I would like this better with some commas and periods. Your call tho! Good write!
I like this little circle you have weaved in this little spider web. LOL. Sorry I wanted to say something complexed. LOL Okay, Actually I like your rhyme schem you did well. You also had a good choice of word usage, and a great way of personifiying your imagery. Great poem