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    dots Submission Name: Nowdots
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    Author: my shadow
    Elite Ratio:    4.82 - 291/150/48
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Just feeling good.


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    dots Nowdots
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    Jump off a building and die?
    Cut my heart with a knife and die?
    Nah.
    I laugh at death.
    Death can catch me when it can.
    I won't lend it my hand.

    What's the point of living?
    What's the point of caring?
    The world is full of woe.
    The universe random chaos.
    Hah.
    I laugh at it.

    Venom spewers are everywhere.
    They'll take my soul,
    if I let them,
    or tell me I don't have one,
    if I'll believe them,
    but I laugh at them.

    Tomorrow may never come,
    and yesterday is what it was.
    But this is my now.
    I can laugh or I can cry.
    I can live or I can die:
    It's up to me.








    Submitted on 2005-12-03 00:25:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love how you made it seem as if its always an option
    | Posted on 2013-12-22 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
      Happy day Jim! Yes, energy can BE what IT IS ~*~ I prefer 2 posITively Focus with Love, Peace, Joy, Abundance, Beauty & Prosperous Healthy Smiles 2 Share ;-) ;-) ;-)
    | Posted on 2011-08-12 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      
    | Posted on 2011-01-04 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      We all have a choice on what we choose to do, submit to or let take us over.
    I'm assuming your familiar with the saying
    "Get busy living or get busy dying."
    Do what you feel you need to be doing instead of falling into a particular failure one with internal power fights not to have anything to do with.I interpret...
    This is my now and I choose to live it to the fullest with no interrupting thoughts or things to disrupt my enjoyment of my now.
    | Posted on 2011-01-03 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]
      I love it. I hate when everyone is just writing about how life is pointless and they just want to kill themselves. It is a great poem. It is really different and that's great.
    | Posted on 2005-12-03 00:00:00 | by chaos_bite | [ Reply to This ]
      wow... its alrite i find it funni how you laugh at things. it doesnt make that much sense to me i just dont get it sorry better luck next time i guess
    | Posted on 2005-12-03 00:00:00 | by Brat05 | [ Reply to This ]


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