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    Author: fallen_angel384
    ASL Info:    17/Female/uk
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 59/87/22
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 275
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 782



    Description:
       i wrote this when my bf had taken away my blade i cryed for weeks and became really depressed with him and everyone else around me, so insted of using my blade i used anything else i could find that was sharp... please comment on thisa and tell me what you think...

    thanx

    izzi xx


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    I'm feeling so many
    emotions deep down inside,
    looking for somthing but
    not sure what i want...what i'll find...

    I feel so helpless
    without my blade,
    i feel so much anger and pain,
    and i can't make it go away...

    I can't believe i've become so dependant
    on the piece of metal thats ruling my life,
    i need to use it and i really dont want to,
    but its already controling my mind...

    Its taken over and
    theres nothing i can do,
    i want to but i can't
    i have to do what it wants me to...

    If i dont i won't be happy
    not now or ever again,
    its already taken over
    and wont stop til the end!




    Submitted on 2005-12-03 06:16:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was a pretty good write...some parts were a little bit off ryhtmecally..but that's not a big problem. I really liked this...I have and do cut and some people don't understand how much of an addiction it really is...I liked how this clearly portrayed that...yeah my BF took my blade away and I had to cut with other things
    -_- . was annoying. anyway good write this is another favies addition:) keep writing.
    peace
    | Posted on 2005-12-04 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]



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