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    dots Submission Name: !Bleed!dots
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    Author: fallen_angel384
    ASL Info:    17/Female/uk
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 59/87/22
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 335
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 668



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       i can't remember when i wrote this i've just been saving it for when i got bk on here (been grounded) anyway please tell me what you think
    thanx
    izzi xx


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    dots!Bleed!dots
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    I can't stop what i do
    even though i've tried,
    it's like i'm addicted
    and cant give up til i die...

    I hate my life so much
    that i just want to die,
    theres been too many secrets
    and too many lies...

    As it goes deeper and deeper
    into my skin,
    the blood gushes out
    and my life span grows thin...

    Ive been trying so hard
    to sort my life out,
    but nothings seems to work
    my lifes screwed up without a doubt...

    So like i said
    i really did try,
    but when i see the blood
    i feel so alive...!




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    ||| Comments |||
      You're as obsessed with cutting as I am with revenge. I like neurotic people, they make me feel more normal. Nice going.

    GBG
    | Posted on 2007-03-02 00:00:00 | by MornSweetSong | [ Reply to This ]
      thats so awesome...like really! most of what you write i understand and i feel everything that you felt when you wrote this...
    | Posted on 2006-03-22 00:00:00 | by dianne | [ Reply to This ]
      This was very well written...I can relate to you on this topic...which is a common one. But this one did have a nice twist to it, not the ordinary type of cutting poem...you brought the doubt and pain and confusion cutting brings onto the poeple who cut into this, and it made the poem seem well...alive? lol I'm in one of those wordy moods.

    But...very good poem, and good luck...stay positive and keep believing you can quit if you really want to, and believe it's the best thing.

    -Miss M.
    | Posted on 2005-12-03 00:00:00 | by fightingirl19 | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this..it could have used a little more description but seeing as I have and do cut and have tried to quit I can really relate to what you're saying here...alot of people that don't cut think you can just quit any time but it's so much more than that. This gave a good look into the eyes of a cutter who isn't sure if she likes it...or knows better than to admit either way. good write. This is a favorites addition
    peace
    | Posted on 2005-12-03 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]



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