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Author: nuttyginna
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Im in my best mates house and I felt like writing about what we are doing. Actually my mates' music taste isnt too bad, but Emma likes the Rasmus, and us two DO NOT!!! grrrrr kill them (the Rasmus) oh...Catherine loves Jason(an extremely small midget gem!!)


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Im sat in a room
With both my friends
Their music taste
Is driving me round the bend!
Its good stuff
but its also bad
They like the same stuff
As my dad!!!
Pink Floyd and stuff
There's Goldie looking chain
Just the playlist playing
over again and again :(




Submitted on 2005-12-03 11:55:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  lol that must really really suck to have music that bad ;). This is a pretty good poem. It could use some work though. Try to use better words and try to extend the poem. You don't have to though. It's just a suggestion :D. The evil bunnies approve >:3.

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| Posted on 2005-12-03 00:00:00 | by Razing_Fire | [ Reply to This ]


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