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Author: nuttyginna Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 24 /22 /12 Words: 50

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Im sat in a room With both my friends Their music taste Is driving me round the bend! Its good stuff but its also bad They like the same stuff As my dad!!! Pink Floyd and stuff There's Goldie looking chain Just the playlist playing over again and again :(

Submitted on 2005-12-03 11:55:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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lol that must really really suck to have music that bad ;). This is a pretty good poem. It could use some work though. Try to use better words and try to extend the poem. You don't have to though. It's just a suggestion :D. The evil bunnies approve >:3. -Rice- =====

| Posted on 2005-12-03 00:00:00 | by Razing_Fire | [ Reply to This ]

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