lost soul outside my window
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lost soul outside my window
there you are again my lost little friend your so scared i watch the tears fall down a smile at twisted lies truth so gone, your lies are incompleate you left out a moment in your sinario and now i know the truth your lost in your self the damned wander under my window sile can you see them they smile as they cry, but they will never know why why through there happyness they must still shed a tear why through there pain they must rip a smile "the angels, not half as happy in heaven, went enveying her and me" with a tear i smile as well though fear over take me for when i can smile while i cry i know there is nothing more to fear i wonder under some strangers window as he points out his favorit of the damned |
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This was very well done - there are some minor spelling errors but nothing spell check can't cure  This is very mature and I stayed in a place once where I saw spirits outside my window but I wasn't ever scared either - so many lost and weary. I really liked, ""the angels, not half as happy in heaven, went enveying her and me" very well done! love,peace,joy&smilez 2 share tif  | Posted on 2006-03-20 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ] | a smile to try an overcome the pain | and cry while happy cuz ther still is sorrow deep down inside thas coo the hole under the windowsill thing i got a picture in my head from this poem like a hole group of the damned walking in a group to each window and people joining em as they go by ... Darkness of the Grim Draco | Posted on 2005-12-03 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ] | |
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