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Unlike Himself

Author: UnPerfect
ASL Info:    14/F/TX
Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 168 /131 /37
Words: 137
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Unlike Himself

"I spit upon you"
the hatred grew
within his usually deep, brown eyes
that are now
so bloodshot
my tears flooded the area
I felt I was to drown
I yelled and yelled
then wrestled him to the ground
the vicious kicking
and violent words
were all I found
as I held him down
"I hate you"
the words came to ME
in a voice so strange
I surely did not want to see
I did not want to look
at his face
so terrifying
fighting his way through it
he was taken away
by two loved ones
and he was prayed to
so dearly
after that
the whole thing was through
we did not speak of it
and he did not know
he did not remember
for at that moment
he was not himself

Submitted on 2005-12-04 09:55:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Hey is this about me? You know I dont remember any of it.
| Posted on 2007-02-18 00:00:00 | by Uthmaan | [ Reply to This ]
  rabi this is so awsome i mean not what happened just that u can write gurl man i wish i had that kind of talent. but then again that thing it really waz scary i mean i never saw him like that before
| Posted on 2006-01-14 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
  You weaved some really great images in this poem. It has kind of a mysterious air to it. It leaves me wondering who he is and why he was acting unlike himself. You really drew me in with this poem and left me wanting more. Very nice job. I enjoyed this.
| Posted on 2005-12-09 00:00:00 | by Amanda Bee | [ Reply to This ]
  cooooooo exorsisim
that rox
need me to exorcise neybody im in da mood
i jus read ibn tameeyas esay on the jinn
very interesting

yo i luv this poem its awsome the way u delt wit it and everthing
damn it was good

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| Posted on 2005-12-05 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
  This is one of the few rare poems I have come across that contains the perfect grammar. It vividly depicts the feelings of the moment; I can put myself into the scene. This poem does not feel fabricated because of its simplicity; I have a feeling that it's either a true one or inspired by a true story. The descriptions are great also. And the ending is mysterious. To sum it up, I really enjoyed reading it.
| Posted on 2005-12-04 00:00:00 | by fading37embers | [ Reply to This ]

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