Utter Nonsense by RyukiTZR

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Submission Name: Utter Nonsense dots

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Author:	RyukiTZR
ASL Info:	14/F/-
Elite Ratio:	3.94 - 133/130/44
Words:	89

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	358
Average Vote:	4.0000
Bytes:	636

Description:
Rubbish... Nonsense... You name it. I've got alot of good phases for poems in my mind. Yet I can't remember everytime I want to write! Damn frustrating!

YES! ITS A DAMN WRITERS BLOCK. Cause perhaps I'm stuck up. So whatever work I submit in Elite Skills...

Are stuck-up too...

Utter Nonsense dots

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I wanna do something silly,
Well, first just call me Billy...

To accomplish our day,
You've gotta make way.
Cuz I'll say curing a dog's sickness through a pet,
I'll buy one from a vet!

You'll have a rainbow gummy rat,
I'll have a chewy checkered cat
And perhaps your rat would be pleased
To eat my cat and say its sneezed!
Yea, bet you'll call me a wheeze,
Please I beg you, don't say it...
Cuz...
I'll...

TURN TO A SLICE OF CHEESE!!!

MUAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!

Submitted on 2005-12-04 10:02:36 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  hahahahahaha..
I like this, its an interesting poem, although very weird, it's interesting..
| Posted on 2006-06-08 00:00:00 | by fly52 | [ Reply to This ]
  lol! this is a cute little poem that kids would like lol not really my type though!its just like you couldnt think of anything else i definately wouldnt call this stuck up!
| Posted on 2005-12-05 00:00:00 | by Brat05 | [ Reply to This ]
  yes I see... Utter nonsense... The title doesn't make sense though! I READ NOTHING ABOUT UDDERS IN THE ENTIRE THING! How can you call yourself a poet making a poem with a title that doesn't fit? It just doesn't work! lol jk. Anyways for having writer's block this is pretty good (if you can even connect anything with anything at all, which I can) sooo yaa.. lol. Normally I would not have liked this poem but seeing as how the title is as it is and the writing was supposed to be as it was...Good job! I likey the cheese line! hehe the evil bunnys approve >;3

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| Posted on 2005-12-04 00:00:00 | by Razing_Fire | [ Reply to This ]
  The good thing about your poem is your rhyming. The pattern is consistent until near the ending. The bad thing about it though... It fits perfectly under your title, 'Utter Nonsense.' I understand the feeling of a writer's block, where you have phrases and not sentences floating in your head; however, I just don't feel you truly put an effort into this poem. And if it's meant to contain a sense of humor - I don't get it? Overall, this is exactly as the title suggests; it does not make much sense.
| Posted on 2005-12-04 00:00:00 | by fading37embers | [ Reply to This ]
  hmm normally i like nonsense but i kind of like sensical nonsense you know where things really have a point but its said in a whimsical way. to be totally honest i dont like this very much.
| Posted on 2005-12-04 00:00:00 | by namesdontmatter | [ Reply to This ]

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