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    dots Submission Name: i wish i could wishdots

    Author: namesdontmatter
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/89/29
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       dont know why i wrote this.

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    dotsi wish i could wishdots

    my ears are cold
    i was so confused
    i was innocent
    you were sarcastic
    push a little harder
    i havent drowned yet

    clinging to the idea of you being my knight in shining armor
    despising the thought that youre just shiny
    desperate to find another solution
    cold and afraid of becoming frozen

    eyes bright like suicide
    cast down at the solitude
    hoping just for the sake of hope for something new
    wishing i could wish for you

    Submitted on 2005-12-04 13:10:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem was truly fantastic. I bet that a ton of people can relate to your writings because you make them seem sooo sooo real. You did a great job. The best part was at the beginning. That's the part that I MYSELF can relate to. I mean, people are always trying to put you down. Okay, I'll stop rambling now.

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    | Posted on 2005-12-04 00:00:00 | by UnPerfect | [ Reply to This ]
      this is really pritty. why did you wright this tho you have to know dont you?
    i mean we dont just wright things for no aparent reason do we or is their no reason for any poetry. i dont know im just kinda rammbleing now so im gonna go

    but all in all fabulus wright

    that girl
    | Posted on 2005-12-04 00:00:00 | by sweet sorenity | [ Reply to This ]

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