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    dots Submission Name: One in a milliondots
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    Author: stateXofXmind
    ASL Info:    18/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.09 - 29/49/21
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 235
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 529



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       i honestly dont kno what this is about, so if any of you guys have ne idea i want to hear ur interpertations of it...i need help


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    dotsOne in a milliondots
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    In my mind I like to hide
    as my problems just drift away
    To love again will never come
    for love is one in a million
    Hate comes everyday
    and leaves every night
    as we attempt to dream sweet dreams,
    to awake next morning as love and hate
    come again,because to awake
    is one in a million
    of every day
    to live a life, to seize the day,
    is like my problems, just drifting away
    for a place in my mind, I like to hide,
    is one in a million




    Submitted on 2005-12-04 20:24:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i liked that piece alot i had to read it twice to really understand it but after the second reading i knew i liked how you put everything in place you did a very good job.
    | Posted on 2005-12-05 00:00:00 | by Tash | [ Reply to This ]
      i get whut the last guy is sayin about that slight contradiction but hey thats whut poetry is all about. everyones all about love but not willing to love and everyones so eager to live without enjoying all the little things. everything all backwards so fuggg it :-P
    | Posted on 2005-12-05 00:00:00 | by StMichael | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm not sure what to think of this, on the one hand I like the way it flowed, on the other, on the other hand you wrote:
    To love again will never come
    for love is one in a million
    then in the next sentence you wrote:
    to awake next morning as love and hate
    come again,

    I dunno, I liked it but this just didn't seem to fit, I just interpreted it as you feel you can't love again but then you can.

    I dunno maybe I am reading it wrong
    | Posted on 2005-12-04 00:00:00 | by babytinkerbelle | [ Reply to This ]
      that was beautiful. everything just flowed so well, and it is true that those things are one in a million. beautiful, absolutely great job.
    | Posted on 2005-12-04 00:00:00 | by interstate88 | [ Reply to This ]



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