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Submission Name: One in a million dots

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Author:	stateXofXmind
ASL Info:	18/F
Elite Ratio:	2.09 - 29/49/21
Words:	92

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	265
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	529

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i honestly dont kno what this is about, so if any of you guys have ne idea i want to hear ur interpertations of it...i need help

One in a million dots

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In my mind I like to hide
as my problems just drift away
To love again will never come
for love is one in a million
Hate comes everyday
and leaves every night
as we attempt to dream sweet dreams,
to awake next morning as love and hate
come again,because to awake
is one in a million
of every day
to live a life, to seize the day,
is like my problems, just drifting away
for a place in my mind, I like to hide,
is one in a million

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  i liked that piece alot i had to read it twice to really understand it but after the second reading i knew i liked how you put everything in place you did a very good job.
| Posted on 2005-12-05 00:00:00 | by Tash | [ Reply to This ]
  i get whut the last guy is sayin about that slight contradiction but hey thats whut poetry is all about. everyones all about love but not willing to love and everyones so eager to live without enjoying all the little things. everything all backwards so fuggg it :-P
| Posted on 2005-12-05 00:00:00 | by StMichael | [ Reply to This ]
  I'm not sure what to think of this, on the one hand I like the way it flowed, on the other, on the other hand you wrote:
To love again will never come
for love is one in a million
then in the next sentence you wrote:
to awake next morning as love and hate
come again,

I dunno, I liked it but this just didn't seem to fit, I just interpreted it as you feel you can't love again but then you can.

I dunno maybe I am reading it wrong
| Posted on 2005-12-04 00:00:00 | by babytinkerbelle | [ Reply to This ]
  that was beautiful. everything just flowed so well, and it is true that those things are one in a million. beautiful, absolutely great job.
| Posted on 2005-12-04 00:00:00 | by interstate88 | [ Reply to This ]

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