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    dots Submission Name: Faithful serverntdots
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    Author: snufthepunk28
    ASL Info:    21/f/ak
    Elite Ratio:    4.5 - 244/178/68
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 814
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 595



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       There is actully a whole neither part to this. anything else from this point even becomes more broken then the first. it is another work in process.


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    dotsFaithful serverntdots
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    The thing that makes a man angry sleeps sweetly with in my soul.
    Hide the pain
    Its easy to be lost. (whisper)
    We are not stronge enough to remove it, and we are not good enough to erase it.
    Kiss the lips... of the sleeping beauty with hidonist and smile.
    Hide the pain in its blanket.
    Allow it to be lost for a whail. (whisper)
    Love itself isnot indeferent to anger, for love is always angry at evil.
    Self-distruction, we raise our wrest to be saved...
    Finding our efforts to save ourselfs only ...fail. (whisper...scream)




    Submitted on 2005-12-05 03:38:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Your poems are filled with so much feeling. I find them a joy to read.

    I do struggle a bit with the spelling stuff, but then again it is your poem so I am OK with that.

    I certainly feel your feelings and see your pictures clearly.

    Keep digging into that heart of a poet and sharing what come out.

    Chrystine
    | Posted on 2005-12-10 00:00:00 | by beatthedrum | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really deep I for one strongly believe when we help ourselves we are helping others for others will be touched by the Love we have been given simply by reaching out to others
    My Friend I wole heartatly and respectfully disagree with your opinion that the World will never be at Peace
    I know deep in my Heart that the Outside world the World I am not familer with
    Agrees with my Opinion of World Peace
    One Day and I Pray soon the World will open its eyes and see how easy World Peace can be obtained
    God Bless
    Your Friend
    Ron
    | Posted on 2005-12-10 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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