The inside is terribly chaffed. Your undertone one of earthy nowin your poem. I'd very burst myself to look through eyes like those....what is better than a (b e e) on flowers in retrospect. Then the window it can escape...thoreau www...I like the flow of the poem ...to days the future now some more...
I especially like "scarlet color", "warm dew running down its vine", and "my body lies beneath wild flowers"...very evocative. I like the center alignment, but i'm not sure why. The sensuousness and natural eroticism of flowers is a very apt analogy for poems. A texture the poet can get inside of...and so, inside the reader as well. Nice picture, lovely poem. see you around kc
This one is very very nice. It feels very warm and soft. Like no harm can come. Kind of make me want to cuddle with the one I love and have the person read it to me softly so to almost sing it. Very awesome passionate poem. And unlike other more sappy love poems this one is really nicely written. It gives you the sense of a very erotic love but also the most innocent of poems in the form of a rose. Any way I have probably completely slaughtered the true meaning of this work, but this is the way I read it and I like it, and I will leave it alone now.
This is different in terms of what Im used to reading. But thats not a bad thing either. I got a sense of warmth when I read it. Certain parts kinda got me confused, but I went back and re-read and got the understanding more clear. Its really sensual and touching. Gets you in the "mood" almost lol. And Im just being honest but thats what it did for me. If a rose did that to you, then I needta go pick a few roses and just watch em for a lil while cuz that was pretty deep lol...but, good poem. Keep it up
A tribute to passionate arousal, perhaps? This is a very sensuous encounter with the self that craves affection and desires profound love and admiration from an opposite equal. Every bit of this poem is as soft as the rose petals and dew that are mentioned throughout the work. Careful of the thorns, young lady, it's the beauty of love you desire. Very nicely done.