I noticed your entries, weren't getting any love(comments) so I though I might just give you one. This poem/rap/freak of nature as a real sense of want and community, You obviously want people to get their dreams and never give up on them. The line even the smartest man can turn into a vegetable was nice, if you don't use your mind you lose it. But on an overall scale this one gets a 5 outta ten. Might just be that i don't like rap but no offense I got nothing outta this one, maybe I wasn't the intended audience. Thanks for posting.