Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
    • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
    • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: My colthes form the seadots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: stormkrow
    ASL Info:    19 Male Wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    2.62 - 51/46/32
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 192
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 727



    Description:
       another poem for mthe pov of a ron .


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsMy colthes form the seadots
    -------------------------------------------


    my clothes from the sea are my pirsed possesions
    my clothes from the sea are all that are left of the old days
    from before we were frcedout of our home land
    my clothes from the sea they are all that is left of old Ireland
    My clothes form the sea are blue gray and green
    my clothes are made from fur and scales
    my clothes from the sea have golden rays of sunlight through out
    my clothes of the sea have helpped me through times of sevier hunger
    my clothes form the sea are beautiful
    myclothesfrom the sea ar eternal gift from the witch of greenwitch harbor
    my clothes from the sea are everlasting
    my cothes of sea cloth are lovley




    Submitted on 2005-12-06 12:13:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      I liked this poem. It was quite original. You should double ceck your spelling though. I liked the irish words, that was cool.

    Peace
    PinkFairy
    | Posted on 2005-12-07 00:00:00 | by PinkFairy | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem is quite difficult to understand, some of the words seem like they're from another language. I liked the mood you had going there.

    -Sharon
    | Posted on 2005-12-06 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.