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    dots Submission Name: Love's Giftdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 622
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 849



    Description:
       "Through the spirit, however, God has revealed "IT" to us; for the Spirit fathoms everything, even the deep things of God."
    I. Corinthians 2:10

    Yep, that about says "IT"....

    Love,Peace,Joy~Know,Experience,BE!!!

    Happy Holidays ~ Give the Gift of Giving


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    dotsLove's Giftdots
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    The water bore
    His Gift
    first cradling
    "IT", a delicate
    drop
    in the contours of
    clouds...

    Light of Sun,
    moon & stars
    Nourish
    "IT"
    along tHE journey
    of a storm...

    And, the night
    rumbled to day~
    The Sky is giving
    birth to the Son
    Tear
    the Horizon
    a cry from
    womb
    Her nature...

    Welcome the 3
    Mother
    Father

    Me
    a
    g
    i

    Flow 4th Flood
    O'SHEan
    other realized...

    Do not cry a
    river
    for
    The Dead Sea
    rises to reign
    within nothing...

    Waters cleansed
    Day a harvest
    of man
    AMEN




    Submitted on 2005-12-06 12:42:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very nice seasonal poem. Your spirituality is inspiring. Your faith is strong and that alone is a true blessing. You have a wonderful way with words. Another lovely message found within this prose. Your form here gives your words a strong effect as they are read. You have a refreshing upbeat outlook on things and it makes your writings all the more inspiring. Very nicely done. Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-12-09 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      As I have said before, your versatility is admirable and you have an uncanny knack of hitting the spot with your words. Another fine job... How is the singing progressing ???????

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2005-12-08 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a very well written write
    I really felt the emotion you included in this write
    The message is deep and strong and you worded this beautifully
    Very Nice Job!
    God Bless
    Your Friend
    Ron

    And Thank You for the recent comments
    I always enjoy hearing from you as your positivity is contagious
    Ron
    | Posted on 2005-12-06 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      It's nice to see another Christmas poem. It's starting to get me in the mood. I like this one you have here, and the referrel to the verse mentioned above.
    I can't say I understood it all completely.. but I did enjoyed the read, and the feeling it brought.
    Take care Tiff.. and have a glorious day!
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-12-06 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Love the structure on this one. The use of symbols and caps in the wording makes your poems standout from the norm on this site.

    Nice Work
    | Posted on 2005-12-06 00:00:00 | by childs | [ Reply to This ]


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